This was sorta funny :] Just a word of caution, you had a bit too much dialogue for my liking here. I enjoy more story!
Very cute. However, I want more details. What do the characters look like? What does her room look like?
nicely written! at first, with all the dialogue- i thought you werent going to add much description as it went on, but you did :D well done!
Lol the fiish? xD haha well I like this not much to say about it or comment on it's written well.. good luck!:)
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