I love how you can play with words and make them turn out really good in a piece. Good job on the imagery! :)
This is a free verse girl. You can also drop by my corner and check my collection for Attys. I've explained four forms in brief there :-)
I liked the last line "what will you do for your redemption, mother?" a really good poem
I like your word choice in all of your poems and love the symbolism! Keep writing!
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