Retribution [short story]

"I know I'm sweaty. I know I smell bad. All I have to do is get out the front door and I'll be safe." I bit my lip and prayed. "Please, just this once. Let me go home without a new bruise..."
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wow i actually feel proud for him! yes i feel like you wrote this well! good detail amd i love how you describe the andrenaline rush as well
This is so well written that I voted before I was even done reading.  Pure pleasure:).  Great details and imagery.!
This was filled with awesome vivid details. I only wish it was longer haha, great short story ;)
I'm glad he got a punch in! Very unique, and great detaik for such a short chapter. I have nothing bad ti say! Rate: 7.8
@AliceDiamond 
LOL he lost xDD

i sound mean D: loll. i wouldnt have laughed if you didnt say 'taken down' LOLOL
This is very interesting and I'm curious for why Tyson is bullying him. Update sooooon :DDDDD


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Retribution [short story]
1 part
PG
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Name Alice Diamond
Location USA
Member Since Jul 28, 2012
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