wow...im totally inspired. luv this one. cant help but read this one again. ever thought of becoming a writter? :-)
nice!...by the way, I would like to nicely point out that it's "PIQUED my interest," not "PEEKED my interest...
Chapter 1 paragraph 3 (after the letter from Prince Charming) "there" should be "their"
I love your story even though I just finished reading the first chapter. Its cool, yeah, with a cute touch of the "Cinderella-fairytale" :">
Wont it be funny if the person who picked up the letter was a gay boy and he emailed "prince charming" right away!? XDD
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