this is really interesting and intriguing... Definitely not something I read all the time, but ..... a possibility... *voted*
Interesting first chapter, it was very detailed and descriptive yet simply written, good job
so so nice for a first timer. great reads. hope you all the luck. *tho I think you should make this lil bit longer.
I like the descriptions. Though you hook line is pretty cliched. Sweet bond, like it(:
A great start, and a nice easy sisterly relationship. Looking forward to reading more.
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