Eh, it was a pretty good start. I though that the beginning where everyone was talking about OrangeCookie was a bit drawn-out, though. Oh well, continuing on!
ok i read this 4 times already because its really good so please ,please upload chapter 10 soon <3 xoxo
Nice start! :D Now this is my first time encountering this kind of story, I'll definitely be anticipating every chapter now.
Holy Mother! That was one of the coolest most creative beginnings I've ever seen. I am S-H-O-C-K-E-D and definitely hooked. Keep it up!!!!! ;D
That was sooo good. I love how you brought us into the story telling about how popular Orangecookie (LOL) is! This is amazing! VOTED!
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