Not Myself Anymore

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Lhafez98 By Lhafez98 Updated 2 years ago
A short poem i wrote....without much thought. so yeah...not really so good iguess...
sahealey sahealey 2 years ago
I enjoyed reading this poem and I could relate to the emotions you were expressing in it. Good job :)
Dawn_Fire Dawn_Fire 2 years ago
this is an awsume,no epic,poem!!!!i can totaly feel the geloiusy and hurt!!!!you should write more!!!
gailrunschke gailrunschke 2 years ago
I do like the first stanza. It unfolds the feeling of jealousy that so often leads to hate. You might enjoy reading my recent  poem, What Became of the Blonde? The blonde might have felt that way once I came on the scene.