Good poem. I love they way you do your metaphors. Very well told and expressed. I can feel the pain and sadness of this fragile broken heart.
AMAZING. Such a beautiful metaphor!! I would've gotten to this sooner, but ive been at school. Good Luck, I really love this. im voting! =)
brilliantly written, just two things u should edit, i guess it would be (noticed) and love (nurtures)...apart from that it is a splendid poem!
Such a lovely Poem! Nice way to compare love like a flower. Love is Flower indeed =)
That's so true, love is fragile; like a flower. I love the cover, it helps. This poem is really beautiful, and descriptive...
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