I wasn't even born in the year 95, and reading the story it is evident that it is more matured than the books written in here..
I think that it was a good creative decision to avoid using cliches, not usually my genre, but your prologue was interesting enoug for me to read on
Intriguing start, although at times it did sound confusing. I wonder will this tale be about her finidng her husband or of the love she had before?
The description in this is really brilliant :) I'm not sure about grammar mistakes because I'm rubbish at them myself :L interesting storyline! -voted!
interesting start. almost to simple :( but I am a huge fan of simplicity so i like it. I love the honesty and down to earth personality of your character.
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