Good start to the story. It's very well written, grammar was fab. It really grabs the readers attention, and it made me want to read on. Voted!
This is a great start! I'm already intruiged and want to keep reading, nice job! :)
I really like how this started out. It catches attention and wants to make you keep reading.
The prologue was so well written. The details on this are way better than most stories here. Will continue reading.
Short but enough to capture one's attention :) You are definitely good in describing things, thumbs up for that
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