I like how you set up the opening and given an image of where Zelda is at before getting into the story right away. Moving onto the next chapter.:D
I love the theme of the story and I like how the way ypu wrote this chapter. Interesting start, indeed. Very well written chapter :)
@AvengedHero Very good start :D very well written and very hooking :) I will definitely be reading more :) voted and its going on my reading list :)
Really good start, you had good descriptions and it flowed really easily, made me want to read more, which i'm going to do c:
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