His Last Request • Payne

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[✓] Adrianna Payne is a 17-year-old girl who lives on the outskirts of Wolverhampton. Her whole life, she has seen nothing but money, gifts and expensive cars. When she loses her father to a stroke, she begins to fulfil his last request. All Geoff wants is for Ade to bring Liam back. He just wants his family to be happy, and he knows that that cannot happen if Liam isn't there. Read 'His Last Request...' and enter a world of mysteries, discoveries and realisation as Adrianna tries to reunite her family...

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Ceevz_mcl Ceevz_mcl 2 years ago
This was great. :) I loved their conversation on Twitter! Are you going to write in italics all of the time? I'm just curious. Great first chapter! Voted.
CK_Kryptonite CK_Kryptonite 2 years ago
Loving it! I really like the descriptions & I can feel the emotion. I want to know why Ade keeps lying though. I guess I'll have to read on to find out ;D x
CK_Kryptonite CK_Kryptonite 2 years ago
I'm really liking this so far! It keeps me wondering and stuff, you know? I want to read on to find out what will happen. :p x
Anyways, great job! You write very well. x
This was really awesome & I enjoyed it. I think she should have told him maybe haha but maybe that's just me! I loved your whole description of the father and the step mother and her life. I think don't write the story in italics, keep it normal, and use bold when necessary. Great chapter though!
AdriannaKing14 AdriannaKing14 2 years ago
OMG ADDICTED!!!!!!!!!! i wish the boys followed me withing a 20 minute time period LOL
AdriannaKing14 AdriannaKing14 2 years ago
HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MY NAME IS ADRIANNA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND I LOVE NIALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!