Wonderfully constructed Olan, I think it takes a real talent to get a Pantoum done correctly; you have that talent :)
I think i enjoy the pantoum a lot; i will certainly try it some time. Thanks for introducing me to it...
Wow, caught up in this web of horror, never liked spiders and you make me see why. Loved it
ah, my childhood memories of Charlotte's Web have been "blackened" smile. a great write of fright. don't let the bed bugs bite. ~)K
I rather like the circular style of the Pantoum and it certainly suits the subject. Nicely done sir, Gav
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