Keith couldn’t understand Mel: he’d treated her so badly, yet she was still prepared to forgive and forget.  What was it about the girls from the other side of the city?  Were they all so nice, or was Mel an exception?
O.O ...OMG.. that literally gave me chills.. excellent work XDD!! V !! ^_*
Oh snap! That just blew my tiny mind! He was her bit on the side! Ha ha!
Oh my god! I cant't believe it! I'm amazed! Super well written!
Another great short story with a neat little twist at the end. I was expecting something out of the ordinary to happen but wasn't quite sure what it would be, you kept me guessing all the way through.
i love this!! its filled with detail and good descriptions!!! 
i love ur style of writing and i really enjoyed reading this!! 
loved the ending
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