Love in the Flow
Science Fiction Smackdown entry for round 1
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This was absolutely amazing. You felt like you were transported to another world. Very descriptive. Very vivid feel to this. I really thought it wa fantastic.
Very nicely done short. Good luck with the smack down I hope to see more of your work in the future.
@thunderusappotamus You're welcome. Good luck to you, sir. This competition is already looking to be a tough one. :)
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Very interesting read and tough competition indeed. Spotted a mistake: you spelled "bureaucrat" wrong twice :) ('eau' is pronounced 'o' in French)