@mounteverest44 Yeah right morgan. How the hell did you even find out about this pile of dust?!
REALLY GOOD-LOVE THE COVER. DEFFINATELY MY FAVOURITE BOOK ON WATTPAD- KEEP WRITING!
OMG this is so cut love lovelove it! STAY AMAZING KEEP WRITING AND UPOAD! <3 MY FAVOURITE BOOK ON WATTPAD FOR SURE! <3 xxxx
It's quite messy. The dialogue was a bit too much. The characters weren't built very well. But otherwise-with improvement, it was good and will be better. :)
Goood book so far, but you should possibly have a cliff hanger at the end of the chapter, I really liked it and will stayed toned to you. STAY AMAZING
I didn't spot a mistake and the setting so far was describe perfectly. :) Great job for keeping this interesting, voted. :-)
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