Gay seriously ?? That came as a surprise! Lovely story,I like the concept! great start! voted.
Ah, I like this! Slightly hard to read with all the spaces, but thats easy to work out. And I love the characters names!
Aww, love Todd and Palmer's relationship :) Nice plot, a few grammatical and structural mistakes but still good.
You seem to confuse "an" with "and" a lot, so be careful. Otherwise, I think this is a pretty good start and good luck!
this is really good!!! keep on writing :) im voting and becoming a fan of you!!!!!!!
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