Redemption

10 Part Story 1.6K Reads 75 Votes
DarkNdeadly By DarkNdeadly Updated 2 years ago
What would you do if you were the umpteenth reincarnation of yourself?
What would you do if you found out you keep being reincarnated?
What would you do if you were unlike all of your past selves in almost every possible way?

Amora Hart is a foster kid, ever since her parents died in a house fire and her other relatives didn't want to take her in. She had to switch schools, and is now outcast. She's counting down the days until she turns eighteen; that's when she gets her inheritance and all of the things her parents left for her. That's when she thinks all of her problems will go away. 
Then she meets Cam, the mysterious, funny, a-little-cocky, and all-around HOT stranger who seems to like her- then ignore her all together- then like her again. 
Throw in some bitches, two complete sleazes, and a few near-death experiences, and you get Amora's life.
That's high school for you.
sophiasticate sophiasticate 2 years ago
My first thought when I reached the story:Hmm...guess i'll be reading a few pages

My thought now:How the heck did I get to chapter 9!?
beccaann13 beccaann13 2 years ago
I love this prologue :) It gives just enough to make me want to read more and it seems like your story is going to be really unique!
melodyiscool melodyiscool 2 years ago
Love it.  Very good start.  Makes me want to keep reading. (:
Alayna93 Alayna93 2 years ago
Love this,, it definitely keeps the reader wanting to read on. Very well written!!
Nice prologue. I love how you easily lured the readers in with a short and beautifully written prologue. I love your use of technique when you kept on using the word "repeat," so it'll be stuck in the readers' mind. It flowed pretty well, and it seems captivating so far. Good job! :)
SumireHime SumireHime 2 years ago
This sounded insightful and melancholy. Sounds like there is a stalker involved who is not human, which adds intrigue. But it also sounds like your main liked the stalker. Its very interesting :3