I really like it! thanks 4 telling me to read it... not even close to done though
Wow! Very great beginning and really descriptive in letting the reader feel the pain she felt.(:
Really great, the word "discriptive" is an understatment on the story. Awesome story!
love it! It really helps on how dscriptive I should be. I credit you. Thanks for thr comment by the way plus I voted!
Wow!! I like it!! Its amazing, so descriptive. I feel like im watching the whole scene happen! Well done :)
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| Name | Savannah Jade |
| Location | California |
| Member Since | Jan 04, 2012 |
| Votes Received | 472 |