Make longer chapters. You're never going to keep readers with these short chapters.
Ahh Cliffhanger really!? lol cant wait for the next update plase and can you write the chpaters alittle longer
Thanks for the Ded... XD and wow... your poor person... >..> I vote for him to kill her. XD
Ow. My. God! Such a sexy picture of Niall! I love niall! Where did you find that one? Can you send it to me in a mail please? Xxx
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