"I am so happy cause today I found my friends, they are in my head."-Kurt Cobain
u call it sonnet.... 'n I cal myself not a poet..... 'm i wrong if i say it exceeds wit 2 xtra lines?
This one is really good... sestet couplet z nt a cup of my tea
I wish I knew poetry better to help you for the Atty's. But I just don't read it enough to be able to offer you any solid advice :(