I almost shed tears because of this, You are amazing, and I'm excited to see where this goes.
Very very great descriptions! I think it would be a great idea to put this is the Watty Awards! :D
Wow! AMAZING! So great! I love it! Very very very great job! That's all I have to say! Continue on with your story! :D
This isn't just writing, it is art. Beautifully done. I am now your fan. Stay true.
The narration was flawless, the way you described the chase scene was pretty darn impressive. I liked the prologue and it's well written. voted
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