Good weave of words leading to the end...(You will pay for your passage) Very Good Write.
Lovely!(: Interesting topic, too . . . The line at the end is oddly enticing...
Also, the cover matches it well :D
The gods seem to revel in meting out punishments and then everyone pays.
Great mythological weave leading to the punch line>
@xxButterflyKissesxx Totally agree with you. I have yet to find anything of Gav's that I don't like. I'd say I've read 90% of everything he's uploaded.
@TheOrangutan This is one of my favorite poems of yours, Gav. Such a lovely haunting quality to this piece...
And you are almost halfway done! =)
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