This is beautiful, but also like hmm.. i dont know the word:o just like the person said, definitely mixed emotions. You're definitively really good. (:
I loved your first line and how you repeated it towards the end of the poem. :) Good job!
@fireypage Lovely poem. Great imagery and great choice of words. Awesome job! Voted :)
Wow, this actually made me cry. :( It's so sad, but beautiful. I loved it. Amazing job :)
Wow, this was very...vivid. I saw eveything in my head, i really liked it and i can feel it relating to me, in a way. Well written:)
hey this is a realy good poem Faning and voting! will you read mine! here is the link please vote and fan: http://www.wattpad.com/6059899-first-kiss-a-poem
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