Oh my! I am truly awed! You described the night so wonderfully! And the last line truly justifies the theme. Lovely! :)
The way you describe the night.. It makes the reader truly believe that the sun is a cruel ruler! Love your style!
Incredible! I'm stunned. Positively beautiful. I really have nothing else to say. Just...wow!
Thats is truly very beautiful. I just felt it everything with whole body and that was amazing
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