This is a really good concept and you have a really good writing style. Great job :)
The kidnapping made me quite emotional! Really amazing start, defiantly going on my reading list! Love the cover, voted!
Omigosh amazing start! Kinda confusing at the beginning but I got it eventually...sector 17, huh? I love reading these types of stories haha... Reading on!
Interesting start! Like how he's has become marked for life after the kidnapping! Great job! :D
Poor kid was kidnapped! DX Aww! Why did they do that I wonder? Hmm... *wonders to self*
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