Generation X

6 Part Story 1.6K Reads 95 Votes
CyberPunks By CyberPunks Updated 2 years ago
The Corporation has created powerful weapons. Genetically-enhanced children, in fact. But when a group of children escapes from their prison, they find that their involvement in the world may be bigger then they realized. In a world of hovercrafts, acid rain and orange skies, will they even live as normal children--or was their destiny really to be assassins?
Science fiction is always very interesting for me, mainly because I suck ata writing it. You've built up a brilliant new world though and it's very intriguing how you've written it. I like how you say 'she' for the chapter as well, not giving a name makes it seem very mysterious. Good work!
This is so amazing! I really loved every part of this chapter, it was totally captivating. I love your writing style, and your characters and description are fantastic! I'll definitely be reading on! :D Voted!
@CyberPunks I know she dropped the kid but that was what was going through my mind.
It was so interesting! I loved your grammar your writing style. I adore sci fi so I found it pretty interesting. It flowed pretty well and the suspense was killing me. Would she drop the baby or would she escape with it? 

I honestly didn't find any mistakes and I'll definitely be reading on! :)
I'm impressed. This is very entertaining and full of action, eh? This is a movie material if you'll ask me and has a great story line. I love your way of details. you stimulated my imaginative mind by the description you provided and I'm awestruck.. :D definitely adding to my RL. and VOTED :D
I love the way you reach out to your readers.. the boy thing really touched my heart. This is something not many writers can do. Your start is amazing and full of suspense. Im still wondering why would they want to kill the kid. Voted :)