Secret Keeper
Ever since Aria (pronunciation: ar-RYE-a) was born she’s been a secret keeper. On contact, she learns a person’s secrets…but it is impossible for her to reveal them. Secrets are safe with her. But what happens when a secret can end a person’s life and Aria is the only one who knows? Can she save a life before it’s too late?
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BlyssThys
um so the start is pretty nice and gripping, i dont see any English or grammar mistakes.
wow this is an amazing way to start your story. it pulls the reader in :) very good. Voted
I've started reading this story (currently making my way through) and I've got to say it's kind of addictive! Definitely adding to my library :)
Awesome start. its well describe but maybe should add more description on the surrounding. other than that, I like the main character.
I feel the first sentence, you could describe it more. Say how they feel and what they are doing. But other than that it is good.
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