Just wanted to say your description made me feel like I was reading the back of a novel, loved it.
Don't read alot of fan fic but this one is good. I can't wait to read another chap. Adding this to my library. :)
The start really gave me realistic imagery! It's great! and I didn't spot any mistakes so it means it's polished all ready. Good work!
Love the blood im vampire person!! so i think its good so far!! I love how you put fan fic!!! but yea i addin your story!?! to my fav! upload soon(:
I don't know why you don't have more reads and stuff- this is really great. It's an intriguing beginning, and makes you want to read on. *voted*
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