Nice beginning! Ahh I'm in love with your story. Original story idea; I can't stop reading!
Very interesting beginning, love! I like how you set the tone for the rest of your story, voted!
Short yet interesting introduction. I adore how you concluded it with a powerful rhetorical question. It was wonderful to read. Voted.
I liked your preface, I found it interesting and it was well written. It seemed really mysterious and I can't wait to read more! :D
That's a really cryptic but intriguing start, it's short, but it manages to convey the start of the tale. I wonder who dies?
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