Paladin's Eleven (Previously 11)

9 Part Story 6.1K Reads 391 Votes
Girl By Abbzygail Updated 3 years ago
Every three hundred years, eleven very special children are born. It is there duty to protect all of the worlds and maintain order. Everything was perfect, until this year, when they are all taken at birth and trained to destroy the world.
    
    Rated PG-13 for violence and language
Nice opening. Really sets up things nicely and gives the reader something to look forward to. What's going on? How are these people? Why are a lot of them going to die? Many reasons to keep reading.
Really good start. Really interesting. I loved the end sentance.
Oh!  This seems really good!  A very different idea from the usual!  Voted!  ;-)
okay, one, LOVED THE DESCRIPTION! IT'S REALLYYYYY UNIQUE! I LOVE ACTION STORIES! HAHA :)
Exciting opening. I like the idea and I definitely want to read on.
Nice beginning! Ahh I'm in love with your story. Original story idea; I can't stop reading!