Paladin's Eleven (Previously 11)

Every three hundred years, eleven very special children are born. It is there duty to protect all of the worlds and maintain order. Everything was perfect, until this year, when they are all taken at birth and trained to destroy the world. Rated PG-13 for violence and language
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Oh!  This seems really good!  A very different idea from the usual!  Voted!  ;-)
okay, one, LOVED THE DESCRIPTION! IT'S REALLYYYYY UNIQUE! I LOVE ACTION STORIES! HAHA :)
Nice beginning! Ahh I'm in love with your story. Original story idea; I can't stop reading!
Very interesting beginning, love!  I like how you set the tone for the rest of your story, voted!
Short yet interesting introduction. I adore how  you concluded it with a powerful rhetorical question. It was wonderful to read. Voted.
That's a really cryptic but intriguing start, it's short, but it manages to convey the start of the tale. I wonder who dies?


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