My Life As a Ghost

12 Part Story 4.7K Reads 88 Votes
Gabby Rener By Gabby Rener Updated 4 years ago
You may know me from my running.  You may know me from the newspaper.  But I bet you would never had guessed you'd know me how I am now.  The ghost, not the runner.  Now you'd know me as the savior, the one who will save you from the lies that have been woven inside your life.  Maybe that's how you know me.  But most people haven't heard of my new self, so I'm here to explain it to you.  My Life(as a ghost).
Hi, I really like this story but I think you should get rid of the brackets in the title. I think it would be better without the brackets. apart from that, I like this story and imma gonna keep reading on now :)
It's so good!   love how you don't wait to build the action, it's just there to begin with.  Please read my new (and only) story!
blueberries! lol :) i like the plot - it sounds very interesting :D this is a great chapter! voted!
this is a good start! I don't think i've read a story like this yet...it sounds interesting =) *voted. oh and blueberries lol 
Good job but there were some errors. Minor though. Thanks for reading mine.