Stupid cliffhanger... I really like it its not over done like other stories, just the right amount of icing.
This was really good! Nice ending as well! This chapter was filled with description and i spotted no errors. Please continue because i'm loving this so far
Noooo! What happen next?! Your plot is really exciting, it has the potential to do really well! :)) I can't wait to read the next chapter :D
The ending was awesome, you have me wanting to read more! Good details, and saw no errors.
:O Dang. Just because I make so many cliffhangers doesn't mean I like them! lol! I want more!
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