My Little Secret
Naomi Winters has been living a rough life for a couple of years now, but she never showed any emotion about it. But when her mom commits suicide, everything changes. She gets adopted by Carrie and Jack, a young couple who have a three year old son. Naomi moves in with Carrie and Jack, in to a brand new town. Some would say it was a fresh start for Naomi, but for Naomi it was like any other day. Lonely. That's till she meets Joseph at school and she begins to open up to him, she then realizes that Joseph has also got a dark past. Will Naomi trust him? Will they be friends or more? Will Naomi see happiness again?
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Snowwhisper
Sniff, sniff. That was so well written. There were no mistakes and the story flowed really well. Update soon. :)
This was really intense-in a good way;)- and the plot sound sintresting! Your style of writing really pulls you in and i cant wait to read more!:D<3
Really like the start, draws you in. I like how the main character is in a crisis from the start. Two thumbs up.
I really feel the emotion of Naomi here. It's good. You know how to express her feelings well. :)
You've added a lot of detail, which makes everything so much easier to picture! I really liked it, upload soon!
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