Achilles: Pepromene

Achilles is the tale of a young Prince destined to be the mate of the wrong girl living in the wrong place,at the wrong time from the wrong family. Their pasts hindering down their future, their personalities like Fire and Ice and their love like Fire and Gasoline, they struggle to find their way maintain peace and manage a kingdom...that is if Fate and her love Destiny doesn't have another plan.
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one thing I would advice is describe a bit, set the setting rather than pure dialogue
I had that problem with a story of mine.  I basically had to take it down completely and repost it as PG-13.
OMG REALLY GOOD SO FAR IM ON THE SECOND CHAP. THE REASON I READ SO FAST IS BECAUSE I READ ALL OF THE HARRY POTTER BOOKS
Even though I don't really read Science Fiction books I like this one. Even though I hardly knew half of the words you were saying it was good. (:
@MonaaB Oh okay. Thought you invented them. Okay I guess I have to wait then. :P Welcome! :)
I loved it !!!! It really got me hooked with being so descriptive and creative ! *thumbs up* lol :)


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Achilles: Pepromene
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