This is waaaaaay too rushed, and you REALLY need to check your grammar. The plot is good, but it needs more details.
I just don't know what this is, it's way too rushed and it's un-descriptive.. I like the plot, but it's very over used.. sorry.
It was a little fast but absolutely amazing at the same time!!!! Wonderful!!!!! Chapter 1 Tera
It's a good story and good plot but you rush through it too quickly. Slow it down, add a bit more description, and watch your spelling and grammar..
I just started reading this book and its great but will it have separate rated r chapters? It just seems like this would be the type of book
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| Location | Behind You |
| Member Since | Jan 02, 2012 |
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