If We're A Fairytale (Completed)
"Another thing, promise me....." I swallowed the lump in my throat. My tears and his were falling, betraying our facade and showing the pain we were desperately trying to hide. I can do this. This is for him and for me. I took my hand from him and kissed him for the last time. Thanking him for making me happy and for giving me his child. "...promise me, that we'll never meet again..."
That time, I let go of my fantasies, my memories and my happiness. I let go of my fairytale and my happily ever after.
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funqueen14
The starting was amazing. I was just thinking 'how does she know what i want'? Lol this is really good. Good descriptions. Voted
You get a great sense of something underlying beteen them. That leaves open questions making me wonder - is she? What will she do?
Interesting concept. The characters and the mannerisms are spot on. Their is an aura of uniqueness. Very well laid out. The ingenuity is spell binding :):)
Good use of words. Just take note of blocking. Transition them well, so you can avoid that. :)
This Is A Lovely Start! Your Way Of Writing Is Just Great! I Love This Chapter, It's Great! I Can't Wait To Read Onnn!<3
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