wow I really like the prologue... it was really great :) I liked the last part that says: but this book is not about a life.... wow... really interesting...
This is really deep. I like it a lot! I actually thought I wasn't going to like it. But I read the first sentence and it dragged me right into it! So good!
Really nice work! Needs a little review for grammar, but nicely done none the less
Might want to space out the beginning, but I loved the blunt sentences at the end, great work!♥
@MaraMorigan Yeah it sucks when you overlook something when it is actually a word, but has a totally different meaning :)
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