Hellfire

Charlie is fearful of who he truly is. For when night falls he become something of anyone's nightmare. And despite being somewhere in the back of his mind, watching everything he does - he can not control who or what controls him. All he knows is if he doesn't find a way to release this demon inside him, sooner or later he will become this evil completely.
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@LilMissSteampunk Thanks, I really like leaving helpful comments because I enjoy getting them.
This reads very well, try and get a bit more description in and flesh it out more.
I love how you write and put quotes at the beginning it really hooks the reader, especially me!!!  :) xo
AH! This was so good! A great thriller. Also, I love the quote at the beginning!
There are a couple little mistakes here and there... nothing major.... this story is really good, scared me a little :D Love it
I love your description of the street, seemed so real.... I LOVE horror, and this is the perfect story for me


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