I love your description of the street, seemed so real.... I LOVE horror, and this is the perfect story for me
@LilMissSteampunk Oh no problem at all :) Everything else is amazing so I wouldn't worry about it to much - I'm sure you'll get it in no time ^_^
This is a great way to dive into the story. I'm super picky about what I read. This I'd love to read. :)
Short and interesting. I like where you're going with this story and look forward to more :DDD
That's an engaging prologue, good job for the start and I hope you continue like this in your first chapter :) voted!
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| Location | Welsh almost English but not quite. |
| Member Since | Jul 24, 2012 |
| Votes Received | 365 |