Great chapter, love, well done! Your descriptions are lovely and so is your dialogue! Voted!
I love your story !! I will continue reading for sure!Great plot AWESOME characters! PERFECT!
I hate Jasper!!!! What an ***hole!!!!! But I like Ben, he seems a good friend that would always be there for you!!!! I really enjoyed reading this!!!!
Great start and awesome storyline. I like the part where she talks to herself. Voted!
OMGOSH!!!! Amazing beginning! I loved it from when I first looked at the title ;) Thanks For writing!!
The opening description really caught my eye. The battle she has with her self if is really well written. Nice job!
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