I loved it, I shared it to my sister (she likes Pride and Prejudice, too) and she too, liked it! Great job on this. =)
Im not really a into fanfics or Pride and Prejudice but this is really interesting. And I love your descriptive style:)
It's still really good though. I think ur a really good writer.
Ohy god 8 pages I have just read the first yet but it's intresting and I m reading it further
I like it. you did a very good job with the language too. Almost like I'm reading Jane Austen herself. Keep it up!
I hate Pride and Prejudice, however you made me like it! Well your version anyway. There was so much description and the words flowed amazinly well! Well done
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