ally and venice remind me of my bestfriemd and myself. we talk to each other just like that lol.
The reason you mentioned Pakistan is enough to vote for this chapter. : )) Nice story BTW. : )
INTERESTING.....got me to move on the next chapter....guess i wont settle till it reads the emd....;-)
Awesome! it really sounds interesting! I'm gonna look at some more of this. The way the dialogue is written is REALLY good!
I like it way to go on the first chapter of the book I wonder why he was looking angry?
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