To start with I was kinda.. doubtful as the story went on.. but it's turning quite good! On to chapter 2 now>>>> :) xxx
I loved the format this was written in! It was different and very easy to read! Also, love love LOVE your cast ;)
Hahaha, this is one nice story :) But maybe make it a little bit more detail perhaps? To the next chapter! Voted :D
@acousticprincess screw you... Im no gay. Just deal with it! your story is cheesy and too girly PERIOD. got it, Rio Ysabel?
@acousticprincess ouch! Electricboy? What kind of a name is that? Too corny for a guy
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