illegal love -twilight fan-fic

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_rob-patz-lover By _rob-patz-lover Updated 2 years ago
Twilight fan-fic ALL HUMAN 
Edward and Bella meet in high school and grow to love each other, but if charlie ever finds out about the deep love between them he will forbid bella from ever seeing him again. And when Charlie finds out, will he turn abusive  towards Bella....
vulturemonem vulturemonem 2 years ago
Hmm, pretty good. I would have loved a little more detail and description, and a bit more of Bella and Edward's conversation would have been great. Otherwise, great start.

Lucy XD
CassandraLowery CassandraLowery 2 years ago
Thank you for the dedication--good luck with your story!! :)