a risky opening. felt like it had a daring style to the writing. the cover helps that idea too! good stuff!
WOW your WRITING IS AMAZING you write like a real author! I'd but this and it's only the prologue hahah
It sounds really good, and the descriptions and the way you portrayed the characters was really interesting. Well done :)
It sounds super good!!!!!! I love how the ending is in the beginning... I do that with some of my own stories. It was really good... I will read more!
Awesome writing style ;) Ren... YUM YUM YUM lol Luv da cover btw ...and the title too!
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