Oh my gosh, I freaking love it! They're so cute, and it feels like they're kids, you know. You really captured that well. And your writing flows really nicely!
still waiting for the next UPDATE... hoping that you will UPDATE SOON... lovin' ya story... CAIRO <3 DUNE
Aww this is so cute I feel like you captured the essence of a five year old very well
They so cute and adorable together! It's so innocent :) Felt really sad when he broke up with her :( Keep up the good work <3
@juliapearlmeg one of my friends had read it & it came on my newsfeed... i really things it sweet & cute..gonna read more :)
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