Im seriously creeped out! But this is one of the only stories, I re read because is was so good! I honestly feel like that man is her stalker...
I like that, it was quiet creepy. Why would someone tip with $50? Is he the man that was outside her window? Great start
I love the way your write, it flows easily with a good depth of the characters. I like it :) very well written !
The window thing was creepy... I know I would freak out to that guy. Anyways I really want to know what happens, so I'm gonna keep on reading.
Coconuts. This is excellent. It isn't too subtle, and I wanna continue. So I will!
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