"Freezing Path"

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TadMerrill By TadMerrill Updated 2 years ago
A poem about not wanting to deal with loneliness, but trudging through it's cold bite anyways.
Xxpink_devilxX Xxpink_devilxX 2 years ago
simply beautiful i felt like i can relate i mean i heard poems about loneliness but this one really got me its so unique and well written you truly are one of my favorite poets<3
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SashaWindrider SashaWindrider 2 years ago
It's tiring. The rhymes are too try hard, it detracts from the poem. Try not to rhyme so much.
SashaWindrider SashaWindrider 2 years ago
This is a good poem. However all the rhyming does get tedious. Otherwise it's a pretty good poem.