"Freezing Path"

A poem about not wanting to deal with loneliness, but trudging through it's cold bite anyways.
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It's tiring. The rhymes are too try hard, it detracts from the poem. Try not to rhyme so much.
This is a good poem. However all the rhyming does get tedious. Otherwise it's a pretty good poem.

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Name Tad Merrill
Location Sacramento, California
Birthday Nov 30
Member Since Jul 19, 2012
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