Carter actually sounds like a cool chic. Someone I'd get along with. Very nicely written!
ooohhhh great start....I'm looking forward to reading more of this story... so saving it in my Libary woop!
I love how she snaps so fast. Its funny she argues with herself, like I do. How dud he get her number so fast? Lol Reading on to see oh and I voted:)
its really gooood! i love how it's modern and her opinion is widely shown! well doooneee :) Ceci xoxooxo
Wow, great first chapter! A few grammer thingies to correct, but easy fixes :) You have a lot of talent; great job!!
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