Will there be a tomorrow?

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ShravanPakir By ShravanPakir Updated 2 years ago
Life is so short. Live every moment to the fullest. Leave no room for regret. Break the rules. Live life love Life!!
always_divya always_divya 2 years ago
@ShravanPakir : Good works are always appreciated, sooner or later :)
always_divya always_divya 2 years ago
:-) U sure can write a poem n capture ur reader's attention...
damsel_belle18 damsel_belle18 2 years ago
happy ending is one big lie...
tomorrow is always a mystery....

shravan,end has not yet come...u'll meet---up there :)
beccamiz beccamiz 2 years ago
FANTABULOUS!!!
thats the perfect way to describe your poem :)
@ShravanPakir You're welcome! Always take your time. if you cannot think of anything wait go do something then sit back down... and your mind will be rejuvenated to write again!
I have always  found it hard  to do three rhymes in a stanza! This was written like it had taken no effort at all!  however. The flow towards the end seemed like you rushed it a little bit to fast. Perfection takes time! and Impressions that last!