This would be the perfect thing to put on the back of a book. I like it. You have a way of describing everything very colorfully and very vividly.
Its a really good prologue. Very intriguing. Short and sweet! ITS REALLY GOOD. It makes the suspense that makes the reader want to read MORE ! Voted
That's really creepy...but it is effective! I want to read more Headin' to the next chappy . x VOTED
Wow this was so good, a little short bit still really amazing! It defiantly caught my attention!!!! :) Please continue this I really loved it.
Ah! I'm totally waiting for more of this! I come back and look at it after two weeks and shed some cyber tears because it hadn't been update XP
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| Name | Rachel Houser |
| Location | The Land of Fruits and Nuts |
| Member Since | Sep 26, 2011 |
| Votes Received | 663 |